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发表于 2013-10-20 22:44:05 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
虽然从小对英语演讲比赛有种特殊的感情,也逐渐懂得参赛所需要做的一些准备。
然而,我还是喜欢那刹那的随性。
就像是定题写作,远不如随心所写畅快。

临时将稿子彻底大改
把车协写进我的英语演讲稿
心里满满的温暖与感动

上论坛 见到海东的帖子讲梦
一触动,就发帖了

The University As I See It

    Dear friends, do you have your wildest dreams? Very often, the answer I hear about is traveling around the world. Maybe you once had this wild thought, but did you ever take any action before everything it’s too late?
    I had this wild dream of traveling around the world before I entered the university. Like most other people, I often have the impulse to go to new places whenever I see someone on TV sharing his long exciting journey from home to, maybe an unknown village in Africa or a lonely field in Europe, but I never do anything, even search for the new places I wanna go.
    However, things changed since I joined in the cycling association of our university, CASDU. I still remember the day when they were showing their riding trip map, I saw attractive highlights indicating the places they’ve riden to: Luoyang(洛阳_,Dunhuang(敦煌),Guilin(桂林),Shangri-La(香格里拉)...... for the very first time, apart from that kind of impulse, I felt my dream was actually coming towards me.
    And I didn’t let it pass this time. I soon became a member of CASDU that day, longing for the exciting trips. There they came. Searching new places, designing a routine, booking resteraunts, having first-aid training classes...all those days were like dreams when I look them back right now, but who can assert that I wasn’t realising my dream?
    Yes, I am realising my dream, in university. So to me, university is like a bike. You need impulse, courage and action. You desire to explore new places. You don’t hesitate any more, but just start out to plan and ride. Like what CASDU once said ‘All you need is just a courageous heart.’ Then you’re on your way.
    In university, we always feel ambitious and want to change the world. People may laugh at you. But please remember, they’re just admiring you, for you did what they couldn’t, like we admire those on TV who have traveled around the world, while we simply have the impulse of doing it, sitting on a cozy sofa.
    University is full of possibilities. What makes it different, I think, it’s not only your wild dreams, but also your courage and action. University is a caring mother, she provides plenty of space for setting your dreams. University is a strict father, he forces you to be brave enough and dare to choose. University is also a company, who witnesses your pursuit of your dream.
    And that is the university as I see.
    Thanks for listening.
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发表于 2013-10-20 23:01:12 | 只看该作者
膜拜大神满满正能量
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发表于 2013-10-20 23:15:27 | 只看该作者
膜拜英语大神。。。:onion17
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发表于 2013-10-20 23:36:17 | 只看该作者
本帖最后由 王帅趵突泉校区 于 2013-10-20 23:37 编辑

行文挺好的,如果词汇再高级点,句式再复杂点,逻辑关系再明朗点,会更好的。
排比句用的挺好。
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发表于 2013-10-21 09:17:44 | 只看该作者
一点进来发现写的乱七八糟、语序怪异,中文中夹杂着英文。再仔细一看发现,是Google Chrome给自动翻译了。{:1_224:}
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发表于 2013-10-21 09:44:44 | 只看该作者
可以惆怅地说一直想要把英语学好,然后一直没能做到么,大神求罩!
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发表于 2013-10-21 10:13:52 | 只看该作者
怎么感觉像是英语口语课作业- -

好吧。看到汉语了。。
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发表于 2013-10-21 11:52:30 | 只看该作者
回复 5# 汪泽洋


   不是自动翻译的吧
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发表于 2013-10-21 13:02:14 | 只看该作者
当你想要做什么的时候 全世界都为你让路
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发表于 2013-10-21 16:22:46 | 只看该作者
回复 4# 王帅趵突泉校区


    要是按你说的话,那我可能就快看不懂了,:onion18
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发表于 2013-10-21 16:24:05 | 只看该作者
演讲怎么样,小姑凉
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发表于 2013-10-21 17:23:38 | 只看该作者
回复 10# 吴雨城


    就是让你看不太懂,让评委能听懂的,这样才能显示出英语专业的水平哪,哈哈
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发表于 2013-10-21 19:18:21 | 只看该作者
the abundance of your vocabularies are expected to be more various.  good !
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发表于 2013-10-21 21:51:47 | 只看该作者
回复 13# 植咔咔


     vocabulary  不可数吧
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发表于 2013-10-21 22:25:45 | 只看该作者
我就不从英语的角度说了,{:1_217:}文章感情真挚,很好。
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